Every day we all wake up at the same time and eat dinner all together that’s the tradition of my family and what my mom always told me. I know I’m young but I do get it she works a lot for us to be okay, she prepare the best pies ever, I love them. Their pies are so sweet and delicious. My mother name is Patricia she is 30 years old and she loves to cook pies and to feed our hour and dog. My father name is John he is 32 years old and he work in the farm. He always bring a lot of fruit specially apples. My mom use the apples to make the delicious pies. My grandmother the mom of my dad lives with us because my grandfather died and she was by herself so my dad decided to take her to live with us. My two brother are twins they don’t look the same and they don’t act the same but they do think the same their so funny. My name is Amanda and I’m 6 years old. I love to eat pies and play out side with my brothers specially when is spring because I could play with other kids.
When we all finish eating our dinner and my dad get ready to go to work and he always take the horse with him. We all say good bye to my him and then I have to help my mom to pick up the table and then I could go and play outside with my brothers and friends. I always to this because that’s the only way I can help my mom with something. When we were all outside happy playing with our dog it started to rain and we went inside the house until the rain pass. I was staring at the rain when I get an idea to, my idea was to sale apple pies and with the money that we get we can fix our house and buy things that we need. My mom and my grandma agree with my idea and we stared to make pies. The first to two months it did work but then people stop buying it because the pies were all the same type. The we decided to make other kinds of pies.
More people started to buy pies and then we decided to open a small store were we can sale pies. I love to help my mom and my grandma to make pies and then one day my dad decided to buy a little piece of land so he could work it and plant all the fruits that we need to make pies. Many people know us because of the delicious pies that we sale and we are all proud of our hard work. Now we all live in good conditions and we can sit down at dinner and eat our delicious pies.
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10 years ago
NICE STORY ADI
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Nice story but add more details adi!!!=]
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i liked the read
ReplyDeletegood stuff more details couldnt hurt
Longer story amiga more longer would make it more interesting.
I liked your story Adi, specially because is about pies, and I love apple pies ;)
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Good Story Adi.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the Good Work!!
Make it a little bit more longer && fix some mistakes but its still nice :]